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| TangerineSky | Date: Friday, 23-Aug-2013, 6:46 PM | Message # 1 |
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This guy is talented. I like working with him, i made the beat and produced everything. Let me know what you guys think of him.
  
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| lspiderl | Date: Saturday, 24-Aug-2013, 2:08 PM | Message # 2 |
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| didn't listen to it all but its a good solid sound , but needs a little something with the music to make it sound a bit ...fuller its missing and element but cant
realy tell what but its realy close
I suffer from a condition called dislexix disgraphia so please parden my spelling and typographical errors
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| TangerineSky | Date: Sunday, 25-Aug-2013, 3:19 PM | Message # 3 |
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| thx dude. Dunno if its missing anything , besides the chorus, it could be better, but I did all I could on my end! Hes new at recording
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| lspiderl | Date: Sunday, 25-Aug-2013, 3:59 PM | Message # 4 |
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| its not the vocal or the music itself it just needs something additional to give it a fuller
sound , another musical element /instrument/sound or something to make it more polished
and complete
I suffer from a condition called dislexix disgraphia so please parden my spelling and typographical errors
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| lspiderl | Date: Sunday, 25-Aug-2013, 4:00 PM | Message # 5 |
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| maybie bring up the base track bit more and something additional in the mid range
I suffer from a condition called dislexix disgraphia so please parden my spelling and typographical errors
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| a_chinese_kid | Date: Sunday, 25-Aug-2013, 9:06 PM | Message # 6 |
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| Let's start with better artwork lmao
Good job though! It needs more dancers, soul and rock and roll
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| ic3dt3a | Date: Sunday, 25-Aug-2013, 9:39 PM | Message # 7 |
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| dude, this is good, its liek ambienty type of rap, like chillaxing. shit, sounds liek something asap rocky would ride on it.
http://chf.ucoz.com/forum/71-3499-61942-16-1396993348
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| lspiderl | Date: Monday, 26-Aug-2013, 0:15 AM | Message # 8 |
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| listen to this and hear how full the overall sound is
hen listen to your track and you will hear a sort of emptiness , like a separation between
the music and the vocals
as im not a music editor or maker i cant ell you how to bridge that gap only that its there
I suffer from a condition called dislexix disgraphia so please parden my spelling and typographical errors
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| a_chinese_kid | Date: Monday, 26-Aug-2013, 2:41 PM | Message # 9 |
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| I agree with spidey. The guys voice isn't clear, which you said he's new to recording, but you need to stick a beat with his rhymes or vice versa. You've got a beat but it's too subtle and it doesn't really go along with his rapping.
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| lspiderl | Date: Monday, 26-Aug-2013, 7:40 PM | Message # 10 |
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| Quote (a_chinese_kid) I agree with spidey. The guys voice isn't clear, which you said he's new to recording, but you need to stick a beat with his rhymes or vice versa. You've got a beat but it's too subtle and it doesn't really go along with his rapping.
yeah its almost like the track is distant it seems disconnected from the vocal track , hey don't mix together well
maybie bring up the music track more and find another element to bring it all together
I suffer from a condition called dislexix disgraphia so please parden my spelling and typographical errors
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