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TangerineSkyDate: Friday, 23-Aug-2013, 6:46 PM | Message # 1
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This guy is talented. I like working with him, i made the beat and produced everything. Let me know what you guys think of him.



 
lspiderlDate: Saturday, 24-Aug-2013, 2:08 PM | Message # 2
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didn't listen to it all but its a good solid sound , but needs a little something with the music to make it sound a bit ...fuller its missing and element but  cant
realy tell what but its realy close



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TangerineSkyDate: Sunday, 25-Aug-2013, 3:19 PM | Message # 3
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thx dude. Dunno if its missing anything , besides the chorus, it could be better, but I did all I could on my end! Hes new at recording


 
lspiderlDate: Sunday, 25-Aug-2013, 3:59 PM | Message # 4
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its not the vocal or the music itself it just needs something additional to give it a fuller
 sound , another musical element /instrument/sound or something to make it more polished
and complete



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lspiderlDate: Sunday, 25-Aug-2013, 4:00 PM | Message # 5
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maybie bring up the base track  bit more and something additional in the mid range


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a_chinese_kidDate: Sunday, 25-Aug-2013, 9:06 PM | Message # 6
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Let's start with better artwork lmao

Good job though!  It needs more dancers, soul and rock and roll
 
ic3dt3aDate: Sunday, 25-Aug-2013, 9:39 PM | Message # 7
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dude, this is good, its liek ambienty type of rap, like chillaxing. shit, sounds liek something asap rocky would ride on it.

http://chf.ucoz.com/forum/71-3499-61942-16-1396993348
 
lspiderlDate: Monday, 26-Aug-2013, 0:15 AM | Message # 8
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listen to this and hear how full the overall sound is 

hen listen to your track and you will hear a sort of emptiness , like a separation between
the music and the vocals

as im not a music editor or maker i cant ell you how to bridge that gap only that its there



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a_chinese_kidDate: Monday, 26-Aug-2013, 2:41 PM | Message # 9
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I agree with spidey.  The guys voice isn't clear, which you said he's new to recording, but you need to stick a beat with his rhymes or vice versa.  You've got a beat but it's too subtle and it doesn't really go along with his rapping.
 
lspiderlDate: Monday, 26-Aug-2013, 7:40 PM | Message # 10
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I agree with spidey.  The guys voice isn't clear, which you said he's new to recording, but you need to stick a beat with his rhymes or vice versa.  You've got a beat but it's too subtle and it doesn't really go along with his rapping.


yeah its almost like  the track is distant it seems disconnected from the vocal track , hey don't mix together well

maybie bring up the music track more and  find another element to bring it all together




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